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Having just this tranquil scene. Makes for a change from the normal all action packed submissions.
To be honest I don't think it works because the visuals just aren't arresting enough.
It could be a lush movie though, if u were to really really invest in the fine details, like the way u have the guys heir blowing in the wind.
So for example, maybe, Animate a very slightly change the sky colour,
Have the vegetation also moving in d wind,
Give the stars a bit of a twinkle
Perhaps ever have the camera view move a little
U get the idea.
Actually I feel quite inspired to have a go myself now!
Anyway hope that was constructive. Its good to see someone trying something a bit different.
Author's Response:
Haha, thank you!
With the reviews I've gotten, I'm definitely going to do another, but with more details and some more animations. Nothing too action packed, but just enough to keep you through the entire song (and maybe replaying over? :D). :)
Well I'm glad I've inspired! Lemme know if you make one, I'd like to see.
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I liked it though . very well animated.
U really should give your movies thumbnail images when u submit them though. I'm sure I'm not alone in normally boycotting submission which don't have thumbnails, on the assumption that, if someone hasn't done one, it's because the content is so bad that it might put people off watching it.
Which obviously isn't the case here.
Anyway good stuff keep it up.
Author's Response:
I've tried to submit a preview image but just keep getting some error message about transparent.. something. Just couldn't be arsed with it now :/ I'll try to get it working next time! Thanks for your review :)
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If nothing else, the mouse chaser was really entertaining :)
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Did you watch the actual flash? :P Well nevermind.
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"Do everything completely different next time"
Ok u want constructive criticism, here u go:
*Do everything completely different next time.
*Practice drawing so u can illustrate it better.
*Likewise practice animating so u can animate it better.
*DO NOT use that irritating synthesized voice, tat reeks of the "clock crew" and everything dreadful that they represents.
*If the movie has to be 10sec or less, then at least make it a funny one-liner.
*Finely do not use misleading thumbnails which suggest the movie might actually be better than it is.
Author's Response:
You want a response, here u go:
*No.
*No.
*Maybe.
*No.
*They're supposed to be funny, but you aren't as insane as me.
*No
*Fynrelllie, the clock crew aren't Dreadful, you just only watch SBC.
Bottom line, you suck. Actually, you're a pretty good animator, so I shouldn't be saying that.
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Different
Very nice hand drawings I like the style
Author's Response:
GO!GO!7188 (go go nana ichi hachi hachi), also known as GO!GO! 7188 and simply Gogo, is a Japanese rock band with a strong surf influence. The band was formed in June of 1998 by Yumi Nakashima (nicknamed Yuu) and Akiko Hamada (nicknamed Akko), both alumnae of the same year at Shoyo High School in Kagoshima, Kyûshû. The band's drummer, Turkey, joined in 1999 and they debuted on Breast/milia, a division of Capitol Records (Toshiba-EMI) in 2000. The meaning of the band's name is known only to its members.
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